GX 34 - Blowing Off Some Steam (WIP)
Curious, what do you all think about the text placement here? Kinda wanted “springs” to match the angle of the DA thing so it’s snugly in between the two hooks while matching the angle of the whole thing… I think it looks okay, but I thought I’d get multiple takes, lol.
enbynoctis replied:
personally I’d try curving the “springs” to match the, uh, curve underneath it - this looks good! but I think that might look even better?
Thanks for the tip! You mean something like this?
I also applied the curve to “Hot” and softened the black border on both. Not sure the “Hot” placement is perfect, though… (Here’s the blank shot, if you’d be able to give it your own spin so I get what you mean, lol.)
enbynoctis replied
that’s exactly what I was thinking! it looks great :Db
Ah, excellent, that does look better, haha. Thanks, Kay!
semageon replied:
I like the curving! I think if you moved the “Hot” over a little bit to the right it’d fit into the natural well created in the “Spring” text a bit better.
Hmm… yeah, I could see that, actually. How’s this?
It is a very subtle difference, at least to my eyes as I scroll back up lol. But hey, if you notice it, I’ll take it as a good sign! It does make sense to squeeze it in that “well” between the “p” and “g” in “Springs.”