The One Where I Start Doing A Thing (WIP #2)

(View here, since Dailymotion took it down)

So, I’ve been slowly working more on this! Just hit the commercial break, and as I said before, I managed to edit out the dub’s music to add on the original OST, while also editing the dialogue to play more in line with the original a bit more (meaning some lines were shortened (like with Henrietta scolding Dipper) or muted (and with scoffs/whatnot, I might recycle them in spots))  Notably, I also made Julia’s lines as Yuzu’s reaching for the Action Card fuzzy like they should’ve been.  I also added other SFX as needed to make it sound a bit more natural; luckily, using a vocal remover on the DVD audio let me hold onto most of the original SFX pretty much perfectly (ambient and all, which meant I was also able to get good rips of the alternate tracks in this half/abrupt cuts to work with).  Compare it with the first WIP vid I made, and you’ll see the difference, lol.

I started here since episode 10’s a personal favorite, and the dub was also surprisingly good for its first half.  And this actually came out sounding pretty good! If only they could’ve officially stuck with the original music… Also, not entirely sure what I’m going for with the footage haha.  I started out trying to make it an alternate dub track, then decided to keep some shots they cut (like Yuzu flying after Diamond first hits her directly) but then cut others since they were undubbed (like Sora explaining Hand Fusion, which I had no fluffed-up dialogue to add there) and fixed the music accordingly.  Maybe I’ll just make it another track for the raw and just leave in the original audio… Hmm.

Lemme know what you think, haha.

(Check out my dub/sub comparison for episode 10 here!)